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Day 3 of Writing 201, and the assignment is to use the prompt below: “trust” and also to use the acrostic form (optional) and the device of internal rhyme.
Your prompt: trust
Today’s word is trust: write a poem in which you address, reflect on, or tell a story about the feeling of trusting or being trusted by another (person, animal, object, potted plant…). Or about distrusting them (or not being trusted yourself).
Here For You
Trials and tribulations may come to some
Resting rudely on battered souls
Undoing life’s pleasures, making no sense,
Severing bonds and breaking faith
Take heart my friend on me you can depend
~MEW
bkmoore said:
I’m glad that you are here for those heavy laden with burdens. I especially like the second line.
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mariewilliams53 said:
Thank you so much. Your comment is much appreciated. I like to think that I can be there for others if they need me.
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lightwalker1 said:
Well crafted. even the last words of each line point to the topic. Some souls sense faith depend. in love and light Cheryle
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mariewilliams53 said:
Thank you Cheryle. I love that you picked up on the point you made. I didn’t see it myself – sometimes I think poetry “writes” itself! In love and light, Marie
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kirsten said:
Wonderful job with the assignment :-). I really liked your poem.
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mariewilliams53 said:
Thank you Kirsten. So pleased you took the time to comment.:)
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Prakash Hegade said:
This one has come up clean. It uplifts the trust. Good one! 🙂
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mariewilliams53 said:
Thank you Prakash. Your message is so uplifting! 🙂
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