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Day 7
Assignment: Write a poem using the following:
Prompt: Fingers
Form: Prose Poetry
Device: Assonance
Direction
When I’m floundering fixedly on facing fears; fully aware of my shortcomings, I find you pointing proudly in the direction that I should go. Don’t you know that if I go, I go with the knowledge that I am not enough out there on my own? My needs are not necessarily manifold, but many are they and they wont go away without first feeding that part of me which hungers for your staunch support; stepping in line with me.
So when you point, please don’t point with those elegant finely forbidding fingers. Instead, firmly hold my hand, grasp it lovingly and lead me along the path where the bluebells grow, dancing in freshly fallen snow, in the chill wind of April’s noon-day sun.
~mew
Perfectly lovely.
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What a perfectly lovely comment from you! Thank you very much.
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That is so good you make such a fine point there, i think my mouth gaped at the end of that. That is the kind of poem that needs to go on everyones fridge 🙂 x
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Oh thanks so much. I am chuffed by your kind words. Feel free to print and stick it on your fridge! 🙂
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hehe thank you 🙂 I might just do that or put it near my desk 🙂
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hehe – I like it!!!! 🙂
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I agree with eclecticoddsnsods! Thank you for sharing your Prose Poetry. 🙂
Hi Marie! Except for the image, this post is the same as the other one published later in November 2016 at https://mariewilliams53.wordpress.com/2016/11/25/guidance/
By the way, I would like to inform you that the image winter.jpg in this post is not showing up.
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Yes I’m aware of that SE! Many bloggers re-cycle old posts – it’s not unusual! Not sure why the image doesn’t show up though – that’s happened on a few of my earlier posts.
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