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Writing 201: Poetry, Day One — Water, Haiku, Simile

16 Monday Feb 2015

Posted by mariewilliams53 in Haiku, poem, Poetry

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Today in Writing 201, the task is to write Haiku and the subject is “water”, and if possible to use simile. Haiku briefly, is a poem containing 17 syllables with a 5-7-5 format: The first line containing 5 syllables, the next: 7 and the third: 5. [Of course there is much more to Haiku than just this, but that isn’t for me to talk about here]. So here goes!

Water lilies

Nature’s Shower

Rain falling drip drop
Forms a puddle on the ground
Brazen blackbird takes a shower

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