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As usual we were not prepared. But that was our way and this is not to say that our actions lacked forethought in any way, but that we had become so accustomed to the way things were, we knew only what we knew and that had been sufficient in its own way to deal with the vicissitudes of life. Strife was rife, and though the battle ground was real, the laughter that we shared, became a place where we could safely repair our armour, sharpen our wits as well as our spears to dent the onslaught of fears which like flood waters burst their dam and threatened to strike more often than we would have liked.
We plotted and planned, planned and plotted, dotted the ‘I’s and crossed the ‘T’s, and in our dreams subjected ourselves to living a life of constant ease. When the rain comes we said, things would be different. A life well-spent was our intent and bent on this and very little else, we kept an eye on the gathering storm clouds and would not allow the passage of time to dampen our resolve. We learned to make do with the drought and thought we ought to place our barrels in a place where when the rain came, not a drop would be lost. We bought enough barrels and damn the cost – what price our hopes and dreams?
When the rain came, so entrenched were we, we failed to see the raindrops. We did not hear the pitter-patter of freedom drumming on the window panes. And it pains me now to say that we did not fling the doors open wide and dance unreservedly upon the thirst-ridden earth now slowly, thankfully, surrendering to the watery saviour, releasing all that was bound and giving life anew.
~ Marie Williams – 2017
tellingheavysecrets said:
Beautifully written 🙂
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mariewilliams53 said:
Thank you THS.🌺
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SoundEagle said:
Agreeing with tellingheavysecrets! Thank you for your soulful reflection in this post, Marie the Moon.
Here downunder, the new year has been very hot and dry so far, and we need more rain to quench and cool down the region. We also just had the Australia Day (26 January)!
Rain, Rein, Reign!
The Rain in Spain Reins mainly on the Reign.
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mariewilliams53 said:
Thank you SoundEagle for your kind comments. May I wish you a belated Happy Australia Day and evoke the gods of rain to reign on Australia’s plains. Were I not more humble, I would dedicate this piece of prose poetry to the day, but I fear that modesty prevents me from doing so. 🙂
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SoundEagle said:
SoundEagle appreciates your belated good wish and sweet thoughts, and hopes that you are not too modest to perform the rain dance to evoke and persuade the gods of rain.
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mariewilliams53 said:
You are most welcome, SE and in the interests of good neighbourliness, please alert me when the first raindrops fall on those hitherto lush Australian plains (one assumes they are rather dry due to the lack of rain), as that will mean that I have been performing the rain dance. 🙂
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SoundEagle said:
Hi Marie the Moon,
It finally rained a little this morning. Much more is needed. There could be more rain on the way. Keep dancing!
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mariewilliams53 said:
I was hoping I could have the day off today, SE. I have been dancing all night – but for you – anything!! Here I go … waltzing Matilda, waltzing Matilda … lol
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SoundEagle said:
Thank you for dancing all night long as Lionel Ritchie did at the Olympic game. It rained briefly about three times yesterday, Marie the Moon. Your dancing must be having some effects on the gods of rain, though it has never occurred to SoundEagle that Waltzing Matilda can be used as the musical foil for any rain dance.
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mariewilliams53 said:
Obviously my efforts are appreciated by the gods of rain and the fact that they do not question my attempt at waltzing bears testimony to this. If the gods of rain do not question it, SE, you would do well to follow suit. 🙂 One does not look a gift horse in the mouth as the saying goes …
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SoundEagle said:
It did rain several times in very moderate durations. Much more is still needed from the gods of rain and the evoking power of Marie’s rain dance! 🙂
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mariewilliams53 said:
I am pleased to hear this SE. The gods tell me there will be thunderstorms coming, so make sure you get your willies out. That was meant to be willies but autocorrect keeps changing the ‘e’ after ‘w’ to an ‘i’, much to my chagrin. 🙂
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SoundEagle said:
In Australian colloquial, toilets are called dunnies.
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mariewilliams53 said:
In Jamaica, money is called dunny. But I digress. I was talking about wellington boots though, not toilets. I wonder why wordpress does not like that word?? lol
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SoundEagle said:
I wonder why and how you suddenly dart to Jamaica. Perhaps your subconscious are preparing you for a rain dance by reggae in wellington boots.
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mariewilliams53 said:
No, SE. You mentioned ‘dunnies’ which is very similar to the colloquial name for money in Jamaica which I previously said was ‘dunny’. The similarities led to the tangential observation rather than an inkling towards reggae dancing in wellington boots.
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SoundEagle said:
That could still be a nice image or scene to behold, should the inkling eventuate . . . .
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mariewilliams53 said:
Get away! You old charmer, you! 🙂
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SoundEagle said:
The gods of rain will be moved too . . . .
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mariewilliams53 said:
I’m almost certain my dancing in wellington boots to a reggae tune would move quite a few things …
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SoundEagle said:
And they will not get away but come closer to you . . . .
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mariewilliams53 said:
tres interesting mon amie …
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SoundEagle said:
Bon ami
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SoundEagle said:
… unless it is a Trojan horse!
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mariewilliams53 said:
To look a Trojan horse in the mouth would be an anachronism here, since I don’t believe they have existed for centuries. That would be a mean feat … I don’t think that either of us would be able to manage that one.
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agoodlittlegirl said:
Oh for hindsight, eh?
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mariewilliams53 said:
Hindsight is a wonderful thing! 🙂
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10000hoursleft said:
Lovely writing Marie.
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mariewilliams53 said:
Thank you Mek. 🙂
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Michele Anderson said:
Beautiful, Marie. I missed many raindrops in the past because I was too focused on what I thought was important, but probably wasn’t.
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mariewilliams53 said:
Thank you so much Michele. I think we have all had those moments, but now we know better: let’s make the most of the rain!:)
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Myra said:
yes
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Hariod Brawn said:
A wonderfully crafted piece, as always. I know nothing of this style of writing, but would take a stab at calling it ‘alliterative prosetry’ — would that be about right Marie? Such considerations aside, you’ve once again evoked a personal past that is at once poignant, distressing and yet (can I say?) forgiving, or perhaps propitiatory of self and other? H ❤
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mariewilliams53 said:
I’m sorry it has taken a while to get back to you H and thank you for taking the time to comment here – always appreciated. Your first question: I hope you find the answer here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prose_poetry. I also like your definition: ‘alliterative prosetry’. It sums it up nicely!
And as for the second question: how intuitive you are?!
The poem wasn’t meant to be entirely distressing – there was a small nod to your articles on ‘contentedness’ and a recent discussion we had about it being ‘within’ rather than having to go looking for it because ‘you always bring yourself with you’. So, thank you for inspiring me in that respect. 💝🌺
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Anna Waldherr said:
Beautiful. ❤
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mariewilliams53 said:
Thank you Anna for your kind word.:) ❤
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Sue Dreamwalker said:
An excellent piece of writing Marie
loved these lines
“When the rain came, so entrenched were we, we failed to see the raindrops. We did not hear the pitter-patter of freedom drumming on the window panes. ”
Wishing you and yours a Very Happy Christmas Marie.. Enjoy your holidays and a Happy New Year to you xx ❤
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mariewilliams53 said:
Thank you so much for your kind words dear Sue – I’m happy that those lines resonated with you. I think they came from a special place within.
I hope you and your family have the best Christmas ever, and a New Year in which everything comes together for good. Much love Sue xx❤
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Sue Dreamwalker said:
🙂 Hugs right back xxx
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mariewilliams53 said:
❤❤❤
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Charul🌸 said:
That was really beautiful!❤
I’ve got a similar post
Plz give it a check.🤗
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mariewilliams53 said:
Thank you Charul for your kind words.🌸 I looked at your poem and the similarities are striking! Thank you for sharing.
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Charul🌸 said:
Heyo dear!
My new posts are up.
Please give it a check🤗
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mariewilliams53 said:
Heyo sweetie! I’ll definitely check them out! 🙂
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brijkaulblog said:
Your piece on the rains is simply exhilarating.and absorbing one. will read your more blogs /posts/poems.Thanks for liking my comment.
Kindly read my blogs/poems and give your valuable comment. I will get boosted.
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mariewilliams53 said:
Thank you Brij. You are very kind and most welcome. Of course I will take a look at your posts, but I must warn you I’m not very political and will probably not be able to add anything remotely sensible to the discussion! Be warned! :))
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brijkaulblog said:
Thanks for reading my posts.. always welcome sir.
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delphini510 said:
A beautiful post written with a fantastic poetic prose. It sings the story
of the village life.
The last paragraph / stanza is fantastic. Your can feel the freedom finally bursting
lose from the ties of the mundane and both spirit and earth breathe free.
Miriam
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mariewilliams53 said:
Thank you so much Miriam for your insightful comment. Do you know, I hadn’t thought of the ‘village life’ perspective – so that was an interesting take for me. I love what you say about the last paragraph too – I’m pleased I was able to achieve that feeling of freedom bursting loose in my words – thank you.
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GP Cox said:
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mariewilliams53 said:
Sorry! Am I being obtuse here, but I don’t understand this comment GP?
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mariewilliams53 said:
Ohhhh … just looked at the post and I see you are wishing me Merry Christmas – and I wish the same to you, and a very Happy New Year. But I still don’t understand: ‘Paratrooper’ in the comments ….?? 🙂
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GP Cox said:
my site is called Pacific Paratrooper.
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mariewilliams53 said:
Ok I see. But in the comment box was the word ‘paratrooper’ which did not make sense as a comment relating to the post I had written.
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GP Cox said:
I see.
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da-AL said:
gorgeous!!
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mariewilliams53 said:
Aww thank you da-AL.❤
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gpavants said:
Hi Marie.
That one picture set this piece up nicely. Great visuals with your words as well. Yes, let the Lord reign with rain in our lives.
Thank you, Gary
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mariewilliams53 said:
Hi Gary, so sorry for the delay in replying. Thank you for commenting and your kind words – so appreciated. 🙂
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Myra said:
I love your writing and what a wonderful example of how easy it is to dance in the light and good company but hard to dance in the rain. I think about this as I’m walking in the rain. Life and what you do with it is matter of how you choose to see it. Thanks for writing this and with that I will start my Saturday!
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mariewilliams53 said:
Thank you Myra.:) Very wise words from you and I’m so happy this resonated with you. And how wonderful: “myrainwonderland.blog”? – this might have been written for you! 🙂
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Lady G said:
Beautiful! Marie, I just wanted to stop by and wish you a very happy new year! With all my love!
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mariewilliams53 said:
Thank you Gwin. I have missed you and I’m glad you came today – have a very happy new year and hope to see more of you in 2018! xx
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Lady G said:
You are welcome and thank you for your sweet and encouraging words. I really do plan to write and read more next year. Just know that you are in my thoughts on and off the blog 💞
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mariewilliams53 said:
💞
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driftyness said:
Ooh, this is gorgeous! Beautifully written and so relatable. Sometimes I’ve been guilty of being so focused on the goal that I miss out on the beauty around me and don’t feel as joyful as I should when the goal is finally achieved. I took this as a reminder to enjoy the journey. Thank you 🙂
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mariewilliams53 said:
C, thank you for your lovely and encouraging words. I am truly grateful that you have found something in this to which you can relate.
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trulyunplugged said:
Oh, my gosh!!! This is pure brilliance!!!!!! I can’t tell you how much I love it’s depth, imagery, cleverness, power, poignancy and plain old fantastic writing!!!!! You have such a splendid gift…thanks for sharing 🙂
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mariewilliams53 said:
I love this comment!!!!!!!!!! Thank you so much Truly – your feedback is so important to me. 🙂
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trulyunplugged said:
Seriously, the honor is mine…I’m happy to know you are feelin’ the admiration 🙂
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Noel Hartem said:
absolute joy to read. Thank you. The rains …….
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mariewilliams53 said:
Thank you so much Noel. Your lovely comment is very much appreciated.
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Sue Dreamwalker said:
Dropping in again Dear Marie.. To wish you a very Happy, Healthy, and Harmonious 2018.. Love and Peace.. Sue xx
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mariewilliams53 said:
There is always a warm welcome for you here Sue – lovely to see you!:) And I wish you a Happy, Healthy and Harmonious 2018 too dear friend. In light and love, Marie xx
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Sue Dreamwalker said:
🙂 ❤ Hugs
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charliecountryboy said:
Fascinating and intriguing writing, so I may not be as dumb as I thought 😀😀
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mariewilliams53 said:
Thank you so much Charlie – you’re very kind.
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chevvy8 said:
I loved your writing here Marie. Your piece reminds me of the theme song I have chosen for myself for this year which id Edith Piaf’s “No regrets” for the good or the bad. Hence I need to practice a lot more mindfulness to not miss the metaphorical rain. Hope you have a wonderful 2018! 😊
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mariewilliams53 said:
Thanks so much Chevvy. I love Edith Piaf’s “Je ne regret pas” (I’m pretty sure my spelling is inaccurate here, and should really have checked first:)), and I’m happy that this has reminded you of your aim for 2018. I hope you have a wonderful 2018 too and I must pop over to you soon …:)
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chevvy8 said:
Ah, don’t worry about the spelling. I love the French version but I had to listen to it in English before I committed myself. Do visit when you can. I fulfilled one of my bucket list items over Christmas and have posted on it.😀
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Dracul Van Helsing said:
Yes, we get so busy crossing i’s and dotting t’s, we forget to celebrate certain wonderful moments when they arrive.
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mariewilliams53 said:
That is so true Dracul. Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.
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Jane Sturgeon said:
Marie, thank you for your visit. I love this post and need to see the raindrops myself in this moment. Hugs x
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mariewilliams53 said:
Thank you Jane. I enjoyed my visit very much and read many posts which resonated with me. Thanks for your kind words about the rain. Hugs back x
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Alana Lima said:
This is beautiful ❤
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mariewilliams53 said:
It’s incredibly kind of you to say so, Alana. Thank you very much for taking the time to comment.❤
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bernard25 said:
Bonjour ou Bonsoir
A ceux qui sont joyeux, je dis bonjour et bonne semaine
continuez de vous réjouir, la vie est faite pour cela
A ceux qui sont tristes, je dis bonjour et souriez, la vie est belle
Le dimanche est fait pour voir la vie en rose
se dire que la vie est un recommencement
que tout recommence, que tout revient
A ceux qui traversent des épreuves , je dis bonjour, tenez bon,
espérez en des jours meilleurs
espérez toujours, gardez le cap
Courage, soyez fort
Gros bisous.
Bernard
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mariewilliams53 said:
Merci Bernard pour vos paroles aimables et compatissantes. Ils sont très appréciés. Meilleurs voeux, Marie
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agoodlittlegirl said:
You are amazing.
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mariewilliams53 said:
I saw this last night, Kenzie and I went to bed with the most wonderful feeling. I thought I’d savour it for the night before replying. Bless you for your kind words. And thank you very much!:) xo
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RoseGirl said:
Beautiful!
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mariewilliams53 said:
Thank you RoseGirl! 🙂
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Joel F said:
Beautiful title capped with even more beautiful content. Thanks for sharing this Marie.
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mariewilliams53 said:
Joel, it is lovely to see you here! Thank you so much for your kind comment which I truly appreciate. This reminds me – I must pay you a visit – it’s been too long … 🙂
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Joel F said:
You’re welcome. Yes, been 8 montha since I last log in to my blog. Miss reading all the blogs yours is one of them.. Take Care. Have a great weekend ahead.
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mariewilliams53 said:
Thank you Joel – so kind of you to say that. I hope you too have a great weekend – take care!
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Joel F said:
You’re welcome. Thanks too.
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Timeless Classics -- Poetry by Ana Daksina said:
Reblogging this to my sister site Success Inspirers World
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mariewilliams53 said:
Thank you so much. I hope this resonates with your readers as much as it does with you.
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Timeless Classics -- Poetry by Ana Daksina said:
😘
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K@countingpenniesandsheep said:
Fabulously woven words!! ❤️ K
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mariewilliams53 said:
Thank you very much K. xx For some strange reason, this went to my spam folder …:)
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K@countingpenniesandsheep said:
Funny how that happens sometimes. Some of the oddest comments all great just hanging out in with the spam! ☺️🙃🌷😱😀
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mariewilliams53 said:
Yes I know! Thank goodness I check spam every so often … it would’ve been such a shame to miss out on your lovely comment.🌷
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K@countingpenniesandsheep said:
Ahh shucks!! 😉
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